
Revise Me
V8
03:502026-02-27 14:12
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In the style of Hozier.
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[Intro]
Verse 1
I built a house of answers I outgrew,
Framed it up with versions of the truth,
Every crack I painted over pride,
Every doubt I buried deep inside.
When the mirror spoke, I turned away,
Called it doubt, convinced myself it swayed,
Felt the tremor, blamed it on the ground—
Anything but question what I’d found.
Pre-Chorus
’Cause every time I’m cornered by the light,
I sharpen up my reasons to be right,
But somewhere in the silence I can see
The hardest thing to change is me.
Hook (Chorus)
So revise me, don’t disguise me,
If I’m clinging to a lie, then untie me.
I don’t wanna win if I’m blind inside,
I don’t wanna stand on a fractured pride.
If the truth cuts deep, let it find me—
Strip away the story I hide behind me.
I’d rather lose who I used to be
Than lose what’s real—
So revise me.
Verse 2
Every feeling writes a narrative,
Turns a moment into relative,
Silence means I’m not enough,
Disagreement means I must defend my love.
But what if pain is not a proof?
What if fear is not the truth?
What if being wrong won’t make me small—
Maybe it could free me after all.
Pre-Chorus
’Cause I can feel the armor on my skin,
Every explanation closing in,
But strength is not in shouting what I knew—
It’s letting something better break through.
Hook (Chorus)
So revise me, don’t disguise me,
If I’m clinging to a lie, then untie me.
I don’t wanna win if I’m blind inside,
I don’t wanna stand on a fractured pride.
If the truth cuts deep, let it find me—
Strip away the story I hide behind me.
I’d rather lose who I used to be
Than lose what’s real—
So revise me.
Bridge
What if I am not my defense?
Not my certainty, not my pretense?
What if the ground I’m fighting for
Is just a door I’ve locked before?
What would change if I let go
Of needing every answer known?
Would I fall—
Or finally grow?
Final Chorus
So revise me, realign me,
If my ego’s in the way, then refine me.
I don’t wanna live just to justify,
Every fragile version I amplify.
If the truth is fire, ignite me—
Burn away the fear that confines me.
I’d rather break than never see,
Rather bend than never be free.
I’d rather lose who I used to be
Than lose what’s real—
Revise me.
